Main Chahta Tha
Main Chahta Tha
Main barsaat ki rimjhim mein
Kisi oonchey makaan ki
Khidki ke paas
Bahut saleeke se sochna chahta tha
Tumhare bare mein meri jaan…
Khayalon ke oonche makaan ki
Khidki ke paas
Barsaat ki kanwari boond ke
Dharti ki deh ko milne se pehle
Sochne wala tha main
Tumhari reshami zulfon
Sharbati aankhon
Raseele honthon
Aur meethi baaton ke bare mein…
Par nazar chali gayi
Sadak pe thithurte
Do boodhey bachchon par
Ek sookhe peid par
Khaali peit par…
Maine chhalaang laga di khayalon ki khidki se
Roti ka dibba sambhaal kar
Chal diya kaam par…
Halanki barsaat ki rimjhim mein
Main bahut saleeke se sochna chahta tha
Tumhare bare mein meri jaan…
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18 responses to “Main Chahta Tha”
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bahut khoob …main chahta tha…dream vs reality and the impossibility of finding enough time and ambience for tassavur-e-jana.
Halanki barsaat ki rimjhim mein
Main bahut saleeke se sochna chahta tha
Tumhare bare mein meri jaan…
… ab ye to irshad ji aap hi likh sakte ho… bus aap hi
lagya rahoo we want filmfare award every year insha Allha. Anyway very beautiful indeed
Very fantastically discussed lines. This is 2 thoughts process in shayari.. Love n Pain…arthat saleeke se use sochna or mamta se pighalna.. superb shayari by superb Shayar Sab..
woooooooooooow that was so beautiful –u know after reading ur work sometimes i feel there r completely 2 diff. persons one whom i know as my jiju n the other one the poet ,the writer whom i dont know at all
Dr Sa’b your academic interpretation of this poem is excellent. Its good we all are trying to discuss literature from heart. Plz keep visiting my page.
Ramnita even in our day to day life we always find our self on the cross roads of Dreams and Reality.
Bharat tareef ke liye shukriya.
Irfan awards are like gals when you run behind them they dodge you. So let me work with sincerity without thinking about awards, they are just by products.
Sum Neesha Tumhari Hindi kamaal ki hai…kaafi shaityak hindi hai, gud.
Shabana “har aadmi mein hotey hain dus bees aadmi” aur poet mein to 50-60 hotey hain;-) The person you know as your Jiju is just 20% rest 80% nobody knows and no one ever tried to know. That unknown part of mine is real Irshad, and believe me that is much much better person then that u know.
very touching and deeply meaningful…
bhaut khoobsurat khyal ko bhaut khoobsurat anadz mein keh dena hi app ko sab se alag aur numayian bana deta hai.
playing with such a simple emotions and words require special talent…mujhe b sochne par majboor kar diya, aur agar kisi shayar ki shayari kisi doosre ko sochne ko majboor kar de, nothing can be better than it………..
behed alag ehsaash hai sir
kaash aapki chaahaton ke silsile ke mausam yuhi chalta rahe , chalta rahe …….
chalte rahe ….. chalte rahe ……
Abhi Raju ne tumhari site dikhai.. bahut khoob likha hei.. dekh ke aur padh ke bahut achchha laga. Allah tala tumhein aur bhi kamyabi de.. Meri duaen hamesha tumhare saath hein
Every time I read your words they open a new window in my mind … your lines are beautifully simple and straight from your heart Irshad … God Bless you ! hope to see you on the top for a long long time ….your style is new and very refreshing , never change it for anything ! never ! and keep writing like this ………
THANK U VERY MUCH HAZEL.
reality alwez penetrates our fantasy world…fact of life….
beautiful words 🙂
Chikki thanks a lot. Keep visiting.
Zindagi bhar ki ibaadat se wo lamha muje pyaara hai,
Jo inshaan ne inshaan ki khidmat mein gujaara hai…