पिया नदी की कलकल जैसा…
वो मखमल वो मलमल जैसा…
वही सुखों का सागर भी है…
वही दुखों की दलदल जैसा…
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Piya Nadi Ki Kalkal Jaisa…
Vo makhmal Vo malmal Jaisa…
Wahi Sukhon Ka saagar Bhi Hai…
Wahi Dukhon Ki Daldal Jaisa…
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पिया नदी की कलकल जैसा…
वो मखमल वो मलमल जैसा…
वही सुखों का सागर भी है…
वही दुखों की दलदल जैसा…
.
Piya Nadi Ki Kalkal Jaisa…
Vo makhmal Vo malmal Jaisa…
Wahi Sukhon Ka saagar Bhi Hai…
Wahi Dukhon Ki Daldal Jaisa…
I totally agree. Beautiful thought with simple words and straight meaning. Its like Amir Khusro’s verse coz I am taking PIYA just not as beloved but GOD.
yet again a beautiful thought! when our whole universe, n the quest of our eternal self attains its fulfillment n joy………………the connection naturally itself becomes ETERNAL,OMNIPRESENT n THE REAL SPRING OF OUR ETERNAL BEING.
BY the ‘whole universe’ i meant that universe which is inside us-its who we are in our sub-conscious state.
sounds very sufi on the level of thought………………….but i must say that the words that uve used, esp daldal n kalkal take it to a very different arena.very rare n very new.beautiful, simply beautiful………………….i especially love the way uve used the word DALDAL in reference to PIYA. GREAT IRSHAD.
bahut apna, phir bhi bahut anjaana sa……………the use of words is simply awesome. Great Going……….. Irshad ji.
its only words n words are all i have to take your heart away………….reading ur words, ive begun to realise the true power of words n how deep an effect they are capable of having on the mind and soul of a person.its a pleasure reading ur thoughts put into words so simply yet so soulfully.
Love is God …..
Love is Pure …..
Love is Powerfull ….
Yet Love hurts ! in all its forms …..
So beautifully expressed by you in these lines Irshad !
Shakespear says ” With all the pain thy givith I love thee still “
cosmic feel…devotional kind and closer to the god…very deep n very soulful…gr888888888888 ji :))))))))))))))))
let me first tell u that i really missed reading r blog all these days…………….went through the previous writings of yours…………GREAT Irshad.simply beyond words…………..u r a true gem n honestly very precious for all of us.God Bless You.
out of this world… so simple, yet so true.
उम्दा पन्क्तियां!! आप नामी गिरामी गीतकार हैं, फ़िर भी गुस्ताखी कर रही हूं, इसी उम्मीद के साथ की माफ़ कर देंगे ..:)
//पिया नदी की कलकल जैसा… ///
कभी लगे सदियों सा बोझिल,
कभी क्षणिक है पल – पल जैसा!
Khoob hai.
शुक्रिया!
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When I submit my comment around 10 AM , it shows 12. 30 PM on your page.. pls check the time in settings..
Rachna at my website Time also under my control 😉
Never bother about watch, Watch your ‘Botherations’.
keep visiting the site.
oh !! for sure i should mind my botheration … !!
and was that last line answer to my question? for dost and dosti , I should be more on your sites ?
yup, My Answer to ur time query.