सांवली सी रात हो चाँदनी का साथ हो…
बिन कहे बिन सुने बात हो तेरी मेरी…
नींद भी हो लापता चाँद हो ये बोलता…
चाहतें हैं यही अनकही तेरी मेरी…
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सांवली सी रात हो चाँदनी का साथ हो…
बिन कहे बिन सुने बात हो तेरी मेरी…
नींद भी हो लापता चाँद हो ये बोलता…
चाहतें हैं यही अनकही तेरी मेरी…
beautiful imagery! its like the echoing of silence.khamoshi ki goonj.n that’s ur signature. that’s YOU.SERIOUSLY SUPERB!!!
subah uthkar aapko padha aur ji chaha ki abhi raat ho jaye aur chandni akaash mein phail jaye,taqi aapke alfazon ki parchaayi ko main, uss khamoshi ke ehsaas ko main kahin mehsoos kar sakun. par sach maniye, aapke likhe mein itni imaandari chipi hai ki tez dhoop mein bhi chandni raat ki thandak de jaye, ehsaason ki garmaish.aap bahut saccha likhte hain. sach!
silence full of music…soulful expressions…lovely feelings…pure romance……….metaphors–full of love & passion ………………dis is truly fantabulous, Irshadji 🙂
“What greater thing is there for two human souls than to feel that they are joined… to strengthen each other… to be at one with each other in silent unspeakable memories.”
~ George Eliot
Excellent Quote of Eliot…Rutuja thanks.
bohat khoob likha hai aapne …. Irshad you are amazing ….
har lavz mein wazan hai ….. romance se sarabor !
Dur ufaq par pighal rahi hai chandani katra katra
Khamosh sanwli raat ko kar rahi hai roshan katra katra
Khil rahe hain khamosh qurbaton mein ehsaas katra katra
few lines from my nazm in appreciation …… of your great work !
bahut achha hai sir. sab vastvik kalpana jaisa.
very delicate,verydeep,very quiet.smthg like LOVE.
इरशाद भाई सलाम वाले कुम
उम्दा ख्याल की मुबारकबाद !
सब रातें सारी चाँदनी आपकी हो ; जब इतनी प्यारी तमन्ना लिखी है तो खुदा भला क्यों ना सुने और चाँद क्यों चुप हो .
आपका भरत
Thank u friends for liking my small efforts. God Bless u All
This was just a NG mukhda of a song, thanks for liking,
Irshadji, so nice of U ji….it’s my pleasure 🙂 + thanks very much.