BEAUTTTTIFULLL Irshadji.ur writing immediately brought an imagery in my mind……….dard ke phool aur boote…………………phool kabhi itne udaas nahi lage mujhe,,,,,shayad meri aankhon mein hi nuks hai jo phoolon ki aankhein nahi padh paye.
a very honest thought.Admirable n Heart-rendering.Irshadji, keep up the good work.we know for sure that lots n lots is yet to come from you.God Bless You Always.
kaanch ko no jaane kaise patthar se pyaar ho gaya
jakadte hi bazuon mein vo chhar chhar ho gaya
hasrat thi bass utni uss dewaani ki ke saja sake vo
unn bikhre hue tukadon mein sirf uskii hi chhavi
abb roz chubtein hain vo kirchiyan dil ki rag rag mein
aur ghayal rooh pukar pukar ke kehti hai zamane se
ke jhoote hain yeh dard mere .. mein teek hun !
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BEAUTTTTIFULLL Irshadji.ur writing immediately brought an imagery in my mind……….dard ke phool aur boote…………………phool kabhi itne udaas nahi lage mujhe,,,,,shayad meri aankhon mein hi nuks hai jo phoolon ki aankhein nahi padh paye.
a very honest thought.Admirable n Heart-rendering.Irshadji, keep up the good work.we know for sure that lots n lots is yet to come from you.God Bless You Always.
bahut bahut khoobsurat…dard aur mohabbat dono ki oonchai ko dikhanewala sh’er hai…bahut kamaal hai kamil Sa’b. Jeete rahiye.
wowwww….very heart touching irshad ji…… 🙂
bulbul, tasveer, sanjiv n rutuja thanks for liking and commenting.
Irshad your lines are very deep …..
kaanch ko no jaane kaise patthar se pyaar ho gaya
jakadte hi bazuon mein vo chhar chhar ho gaya
hasrat thi bass utni uss dewaani ki ke saja sake vo
unn bikhre hue tukadon mein sirf uskii hi chhavi
abb roz chubtein hain vo kirchiyan dil ki rag rag mein
aur ghayal rooh pukar pukar ke kehti hai zamane se
ke jhoote hain yeh dard mere .. mein teek hun !
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