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फिर से इक इलज़ाम जफा का आ जायेगा मेरे सर
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डूब रही है वफ़ा की कश्ती लम्हा लम्हा तेरे दर…
फिर से इक इलज़ाम जफा का आ जायेगा मेरे सर
kashti gar hai wafa ki toh phir kaise doobnee paayegi.toofano se takrakar yeh phir sona ho jayegi.
u r truly blessed to have the ability to pen down n express urself in such honest n real way that it becomes an emotion that all of us can connect with. great going Irshadji.
very gud irshad…mujhe bhi aapki iss baat pe kuchh yaad aa raha hai…kashti bhi patwaar bhi tu hai, tu nafrat hai pyar bhi tu hai, tu iss dil ki be-aitbaari, aur dil ka aitbaar bhi tu hai……..janaab lagta hai aap sabko shayar bana doge…
deep…touching…truthful… realistic…
very poetic n delicate in sound.u r really too good.
bahut achha hai sir…aksar aisa hota hai…bewafai koi karta hai aur ilzaam kisi aur ke sar aata hai…behtreen tareeke se aapne iss khayal ko buna hai.
tasveer, rajni, sanjiv, rutuja, shelly n reena thanks for ur so nice comments, i am humbled.
belated after thought hai yeh ..
bass was going through your posts so I was compelled to answer …
Irshad this is just a stray thought I am sharing ….
aaj bhi chaaton ki kabr ke phulon se khushbu hui nahi juda
koi bataye mujhko kyun beete gham pe rota hai yeh zamana
Hazel Gud one.