वो कौन था जो झुका नहीं, जो कट गया चुपचाप से…
वो शख्स मैं था बोलना, कोई पूछ ले जो आपसे
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वो कौन था जो झुका नहीं, जो कट गया चुपचाप से…
वो शख्स मैं था बोलना, कोई पूछ ले जो आपसे
jo jhuka nahi zindagi bhar vo sajda kya karega
jissne sajda na kiya vo mohabbat kya karega
….. aaj is sh’er ke zariye is tareh aapse milna hua hai !!! Gairat aur khuddari ki presentation khoob hai. Dard hai lekin ye dard baitha nahi hai… khada hua hai. Is dard ka khade hona hi m’hatvpooran hai. Na jhukne ka sankalp shayar ko asli shayar banata hai. Mujhe aseem khushi hai ki apki shayari naye daur mein apne signature kar rahi hai.
Chhote bhai ka Salaam aur dauayen kubool farmayen !!
Hazel gud she’r but i feel there is quite a lot difference between JHUKNA and SAJDA KARNA…
Gurinder bhai bahut shukriya…aap to jaante hi hain lekhak ke liye apni talaash bahut zaroori hai…roz talaash…lagataar talaash.
Bahut achha likha haiIrshad bhai
Parvez bhai bahut shukriya.
wow…soulful…gr8
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super like on Mr. Gurinder’s comment
Rutuja thanks a lot. Gurinder bhai is genius.
accha laga sir , fir se bahut purani line yaad aayi, apni aazadi ko hargiz mita sakte nahin, ser kata sakte hain lekin ser jhuka sakte nahin…Aur aapki baaton mein aapki zindadili aur aapke bebaakpan ki aazaadi nazar aati hai…
Shakti thanks a lot. Tumhe bahut yaad karta hun.
बहुत खूब!!