शर्म की चादर खोल उतारूँ…
तन की मिरचें उसपे वारूँ…
होंठों के शहतूत खोलके…
हक़ यार का नाम पुकारूँ
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शर्म की चादर खोल उतारूँ…
तन की मिरचें उसपे वारूँ…
होंठों के शहतूत खोलके…
हक़ यार का नाम पुकारूँ
kya baat hei…. awesome…
haq yaar ka naam pukarun….wahhhh
accha hai Sir…Sharm ki chadar …Tann ki mirchein….hothon ke shehtoot ….Sharm ki chadar ke alawa sabkuch meri soch se parey hai…Sirf last line mein confuse hun Sir…aapne likha hai Haq yaar ka naam pukarun…
Mujhe aisa lagta hai Haq se yaar ka naam pukarun…. Aap par apna haq main bhi samjhta hun, isiliye samjhna chahta hun ki , aapne haq se kyon nahin likha….Haq yaar ka naam pukarun kyon likha…
gustakhi maaf ….rgrd…Shakti
remarkably wow…soul winner 🙂
i find Shakti ji’s comment very interesting.i guess mohabbat ek alag tarah ka haq, ek junoon,ek bebaaqi se bhara sajda karati hai.yahan shayad usi ka zikr hai!but of course,Irshad ji is the right person to answer. this piece is full of life.beautiful.
Shakti n Tasveer you both r right in ur own ways. I wrote “Haq Yaar ka naam pukarun” in the meaning of GOD…here HAQ means GOD…these above lines r written in traditional sufi poetry form. discuss if there is any further doubt.
thanx for clearing the clouds for us, Irshad.
i find the second line very unusual ,never heard before. n even hothon ke ‘shehtoot’ also for that matter.bahut der se koshish kar rahi hun…………….abhi comfortable nahi hui hoon……………aur yeh bahut acchi baat hai!…shayad
Sir, Kuch Love Jaisa ke song sun raha tha…Ek jagah bahut accha laga….Aapki yaad aayi aur fir pata chala ki aapne he likha hai……..
You are Great Sir….I Admire you , Salute you, and dil se congratulate you, For those wonderful line….aapne apni chaap har jagah chhodi hai Sir…..Love you Very Much……Sir aapki line aapke liye pesh kar raha hun…
Nah woh sathi, nah woh saya, phir bhi CHala, saath mere. Yaadon sa woh, vaadon sa woh, din sa dhala, saath mere.”
Shakti thank u very much. i also luv u very much…tu mera chhota mota bhai hai.
subhan allah
Bhai, is quote ke sare shabd chamak rahe hain.
Lagaav ka mahaul hai jo assert kar raha hai, jaise doosre level pe jana chahta hai… aur ja bhi raha hai.. Lekin bade saleeke se loud bhi ho raha hai… aur zaroori hai. Assertion mein agar saleeka na ho to kintu-prantu uthte hain. Is baat mein aapne bazi maari hai.
Aise sh’er samaaj ki chhatt par mori karte hain…. aasmaan dekhne ki chahat mein !
Kabil-e-gaur aur Kabile-tareef likha hai bhai jaan !
Gurinder bhai shukriya iss tanqeed ke liye.