घर की खेती सूख न जाये इस सावन में सूखे से…
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घर की खेती सूख न जाये इस सावन में सूखे से…
पी की बात में ताप तो है पर जाने क्यों हैं रूखे से
AHH! Great to hear that.these words have honestly come like rains after drought………..we all wish n desire and are actually thirsty for lot more rains.and the couplet,(correct me if im wrong) is beautiful…….exuberates the feeling of being completely dry,even after being fully drenched.
Rajni thanks a lot.
Ground to earth,
the above poetry is very wonder full, i would be glad if you could send me the whole poem so that i can understand completely and enjoy the meaning of life.
love the rhythm of the words rookhe and sookhe…there is a sense of longing as well as anxiety,that have both come out in a very delicate way.BEAUTIFUL…
tasveer thanks.