December 26, 2009

Ghazal-1

Ghazal-1

Jisko socha shayari ke vaastey

Vo mila na zindagi ke vaastey

Banke tere paon pe mitti ka ghar

Tootun main teri khushi ke vaastey

Sapne, aankhein aur lakhon hasratein

Kitne ghar ik aadmi ke vaastey

Hum jiye hain jiski khatir zindagi

Hum marenge bhi usi ke vaastey

Yun chale jaane pe sau sau kuttiyan

Lakh bosey* vaapsi ke vaastey

Aaye na ‘Kamil’ to dum chalte bane

Kaun rukta hai kisi ke vaastey

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*Bosey = Kisses

Written on 06-04-98

ग़ज़ल-1

जिसको सोचा शायरी के वास्ते

वो मिला न ज़िन्दगी के वास्ते

बनके तेरे पाओं पे मिटटी का घर

टूटूं मैं तेरी ख़ुशी के वास्ते

सपने, आखें और लाखों हसरतें

कितने घर इक आदमी के वास्ते

हम जिए हैं जिसकी खातिर ज़िन्दगी

हम मरेंगे भी उसी के वास्ते

यूँ चले जाने पे सौ सौ कुट्टीयां

लाख बोसे* वापसी के वास्ते

आये न ‘कामिल’ तो दम चलते बने

कौन रुकता है किसी के वास्ते

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*बोसे = चुम्बन


o6-04-98 को लिखी

5 responses to “Ghazal-1”

  1. Rakhi says:

    Sir, very intense poem… However very sad romantic poem… kuch samajh aayi… kuch samajh nahi aayi…
    Pehli baar aapki Kavita udaas hai…!

  2. Irshad Kamil says:

    Arrey Ismein udaas kya hai…Rakhi Ghazal mein har sh’er alag mood ka hota hai. Meri achhi khasi Ghazal ko zabardasti udaas to na banao yaar.

  3. Rutuja says:

    Nice ji…Intense & realistic…

  4. Rakhi says:

    Oh… M SO SORRY SIR, this comment was meant for some other Ghazal and got posted here by mistake…. extremely sorry…

    No doubt.. this one is amazing… and the best part of this Ghazal is –
    ‘Hum jiye hain jiski khatir zindagi,
    Hum marenge bhi usi ke vaastey,
    Yun chale jaane pe sau sau kuttiyan,
    Lakh bosey* vaapsi ke vaastey’

  5. kavita says:

    sir aaj main trupt hogayi.. aapka dhanyawaad aisi sunder anmol bhavook kavitaayein likhne ke liye…ishwar aapka yeh soch aur kalam ka jaadu hamesha badhata rahein …

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