December 26, 2009

Jab

जब


सुरमई रस्तों पे जब

कोई चाँदनी तेरी शकल में

चलती है तो सन्नाटे में

इक सेंध सी लग जाती है

पड़ जाती हैं लाखों दरारें

खामोशियों के बदन पे

किसी गीत की महक लिए

आती है कोई सांस फिर…

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Jab


Surmai raston pe jab

Koi chandni teri shakal mein

Chalti hai to sannate mein

Ik sendh si lag jaati hai

Pad jaati hain laakhon daraarein

Khamoshiyon ke badan pe

Kisi geet ki mehak liye

Aati hai koi saans phir…

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7 responses to “Jab”

  1. kavita says:

    Kisi geet ki mehak liye
    Aati hai koi saans phir/
    bahut khoob sir. kavi kitne lucky hotey hai har jazbaat ko shabd de sakte hai..

  2. mehnazjaved says:

    Aapki shayari ki SAHIRI (Magic) yahi hai ke pehli line padhte hi insaan ik pal ke liye sab bhool jaata hai aur lafzon ke saath behta chala jaata hai..
    A usual this is also the same and full of delicate fragrance of love..
    Alfaaz kaise chunte ho…Kamaal karte ho..
    ‘Koi Chandni jab teri Shakal main Chalti Hai, to sannate main iksendh si lag jaati hao…” Really mind blowing..

  3. Shaikhu says:

    Beautiful Writing,Sir..Bahut hi acchi Manzar Nigari ki hai……”Jaise chandni raat main halki sard hawa main,Gaon ki khamosh pagdandi pe chala ja raha hun…Kisi ki Pakeezah mohabbat ka Ahsaas liye…” Bahut hi romantic likha hai.

  4. Rutuja says:

    So lovely & heart touching…Irshadji

  5. Savita S. says:

    Excellent visual poetry. One can see it while reading. Irshad ji u are very Impressive n expressive writer.

  6. Rajni Malik says:

    Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne. Aapke songs bhi bahut achhe hote hain.Aap bahut achha likhte ho dil o chhoo jata hai.

  7. Tasveer says:

    Its really gud Irshad ji. Its not poetry but painting of words.

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