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रात काँधे पे खिले, जब तेरे होंठों के गुलाब…
चाँद साक़ी सा लगा, चांदनी कच्ची सी शराब
too good! kachchi si sharaab,honthon ke gulab.quiet a good feel!
very good…excellent…sir u n ur thoughts are matchless.
mere honto pe teri khushbu hai,,,
chhu sake gi inhen sharaab kahan…b badr.
heart touching…full of passion…authentic feel… :))))))))))
kahan se laate hain aap itni khoobsurat zindagi ke khwaab, jinhein aap hamare liye yun shabdon mein piro dete hain……………..kya kahun, mere alfaaz bahut chote pad rahe hain aapke ehsaas ke aage.u r far ahead of excellence.
good. too good. excellent.stars. aur kahiye kaise karen aapki tareef. kaise batayen ki aapka likha humein kitna pasand hai ki aapko bhi hamare ehsaas ka thoda sa andaaza ho jaye…………kaash hum bhi shayar hote, aise palon mein yeh umeed jagti hai dil mein
IRSHAD,u r truly mind-blowing, terrific, stupendous,magnificient n ROMANCE PERSONIFIED.A RARE GEM.KHUDA AAPKI SAARI DUAAYEIN KABOOL KARE, HAMARI YAHI DUA HAI.
seems like the ANALYST is fading away n the TRUE POET is emerging back.REAL BEAUTY Irshad.truly commendable.
Saaki aaj bhi dhoondti hai shama ke sharaaron mein beete lamhon ke nishaan………
aapki gehraayi saadgi mein hai…….aur romance ke aap hain betaj baadsha ! wallah ! kya koob kaha !
goosepimples Sir tooooooooooooooo romantic..Kudos for this verse..:)