December 26, 2009

दिल के रिश्ते सभी तोडना मेरे बस की बात नहीं…

चाँद की ख़ातिर ज़मीं छोड़ना मेरे बस की बात नहीं…

ले देकर इक जान बची है लेजा गर कुछ काम आये…

तुझको ख़ाली हाथ मोड़ना मेरे बस की बात नहीं

9 responses to “”

  1. Rachana says:

    good!!!!!!!!! lekin ” khali haath modana ” me modana shabd thoda ajib lag raha hai…

  2. tasveer says:

    a beautiful thought! very beautifully penned.

  3. Reena Patel says:

    Bahut achha hai…Chaand ki khatir zamin chhodna…behtreen sir.

  4. Irshad Kamil says:

    Thanks Tasveer n Reena.

    @ Rachna ‘MODNA’ isliye kyonki jisko akhir mein bachi hui cheez JAAN mil rahi hai vo bhi saath rukne/rehne ke liye nahin aaya, usey bhi vapis jaana hai/shaam se pehle mudna hai…

  5. bulbul says:

    irshadji, ‘Chand ki khatir zameen chodna,”…………………….as per my limited capacity of comprehension n interpretation,,,,i could derieve 2 varied meanings from this line….was did u intend to say?

  6. Rachana says:

    Oh ok!! Now I understand. have to say – wonderful lines!

  7. Rutuja says:

    beautiful…. very soulful, Irshadji gr888…….. 🙂

  8. Irshad Kamil says:

    @ bulbul…there is some very old couplet “aadhi chhod poori ko chahve…aadhi chhoote poori na paave”…my intension is jst to explain that.

    @ thanks rachna n rutuja.

  9. hazel bishwas says:

    you have always inspired me to write
    Irshad you say a lot in very few words … good luck ji !

    laute hain darr se uske khaali haanth har bar
    na jaane inn aankhon mein intezar kyoun hai

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