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जब भी मुझको मिलेगा वो तो मिलके गले यूँ रोयेगा…
जितने होंगे ख़वाब पुराने सब अश्कों से धोएगा
beautiful, soulful with oceanic meaning….
Irshad,
It’s another pearl from your oceanic mind.
You continuously make this blog so motivating, challenging and enchanting for all of us.
Thanks so much.
🙂
ashkon se hi dhul jaayen jo,
bejaan khwaab mere hain hi nahi.
seenchungi jinhe khoon se apne,
teri aankhon ke diye mein rakhungi.
khwaab mere honge khalis vo,
jo tere honthon pe muskayenge………. muafi chahti hoon,mujhe likhna nahi aata, par khud ko rok nahi paayi, aapki panktiyan padh ke.ho sake to mere likhe ko thoda theek kar dijiyega……………….Irshad u r truly inspiring! dekhiye aapne mujhse likhwa liya.
wahhh…behtreen…paak mohabbat ka bayaan aur haath se chhoote palon ko sanjone ki koshish…lajawaab.
Thanks Rutuja.
Rutuja u and other regular friends like tasveer, sanjiv n bulbul etc. compels me to write well.
thank u very much sanjiv…shukarguzaar hun.
Tasveer bahut achha khayal hai aapka…aapko inspire kar paaya meri khushkismati hai…aapke khayal ko yun bhi kaha ja sakta hai…
अश्कों से ही धुल जायें जो
नहीं ख़वाब हैं मेरे मामूली
मैं खून से इनको सीचूंगी
चाहे चढ़ना पड़ जाये अब सूली
सब ख़वाब पाक हो जायेंगे
जो लब की तेरे सलवट छूली
Aapne kaha tha isliye apke khayal mein thoda tarmeem kar di.
bahut bahut bahut shukriya Irshad. main yahi kehna chahti thi.par,gustakhi ke liye muafi chahungi,ek sawaal hai mera,esp in regard to poetry.main yeh kehna chahti thi ki -jab aap kisi se mohabbat karte hain toh unke khwaab, unse zyaada aapke ho jaate hain,aur unke tootne ki taqleef bhi aapko zyaada hoti hai.vo bikhre se khwaab jo haqeeqat na bun sake,aapko ek pal bhi jeene nahi dete aur aap unko poora karne ke liye apni jaan laga dete hain,unhein poora karke hi chaain lete hain……..aapko tabhi sukoon milta hai jab vo khwaab haqeeqat banke unke hoonthon par muskaan laate hain….mere sawaal yeh hai ki aapne”pak” shabd kyun istemaal kiya ? ‘pak’ shabd,sapno ke ‘sach’hone ko bhi bayaan karta hai?…………actually aapke is shabd ne mere vichaaron mein ek nayi soch ko janam de diya hai..uske baare mien phir baat karungi.bahut shukriya aapka. aur khushkismat main hoon.
kammal! waise Irshad, dhulke to cheezen aur saaf ho jaatein hain,aur chamak jaatein hain, aur khil jaatein hain.par poorane khwaab dhul jaayein toh chubhne kyun lugte hain?……………par kya khwaab sach mein purane ho paate hain?mera khayal hai,ki khwaab ya toh khwaab hote hain ya haqeeqat.samay pe poore ho jaane wale khwaab khushi dete hain…………..par der se haqeeqat ki sehar dekhne wale khwaab kya dete hain?
Tasveer,
maine 5th line mein khawab ke saath paak shabd ka istemaal ‘khawabon ko ek rutba’ dene ke liye kiya hai, agar aap iss PAK shabd ko haqeeqat ke arth mein lengi to khayal chhota ho jayega. khawabon ka haqeeqat hona to aam aur obvious khayal hai, lekin khawadon ko status milna naya khayal hai. aapka khayal aapki poetry aapke hawale. saare chandigarh ko sunaiye 🙂
Bharti, khawab bilkul purane hote hain. I think you are tossing in between dream n ambition. Dreams can but ambition can’t.
im sorry Irshad if ive crossed my line.main toh yeh sochti thi ki shayad jo shaks mohabbat ke pak rishte ko har pal jee raha hai aur usmein bune sapno ko poora karna uski zindagi hai-vo sapne jinke liye vo kuch bhi karne ko taiyyar hai-vo toh honge hi pak,kyunki unka source hi pak hai.aapka point of view main samajhti hoon…….main koi shayara nahi,main apna likha sunane ki galti nahi karungi,kyunki main likh hi nahi pati.but thanks for ur inputs,i’ll always keep them with me.
Tasveer
main sirf poetry ke POV se cheezon ko dekh raha hun…aap shayad personal POV se dekh rahi hain, coz i dnt knw ur personal POV so…likhte rahiye. God Bless.
well………. that’s an interesting thought.would appreciate if u could elaborate on that.
beautiful……….extremely heart-rendering poetry.ji Irshad main Solan mein hun,bahut thand hai yahan.umeed hai aap acche hain.main bahut acchi hun.
thankyou sooooo much Irshad. ive learnt a big lesson today.aapne mujhe ek bahut anmol cheez sikhayi hai aaj.ill always keep it with me whenever im involved in some creative process.thanks again!
sir,
accha laga aur saccha laga…saada aur simple… shabdon ki chayanta aur rishton ki gehanta dono nazar aati hai…
i completely agree with Rutuja mam.each piece of your poetry has immense layering n is multi-dimensional.jitna gehre utarte hain, utna hi khaas kuch paate hain.keep it going Irshad ji
Thanks a lot SHAKTI. Keep visiting.
Thanks a lot, Shelly Mam. You have expressed my feelings correctly & in a better way. I agree with you completely.
Irshad, thanks a ton. It’s our great pleasure…we all are blessed to have you 🙂
उम्दा भाव हैं लेकिन मै थोडा आशावादी होने मे यकीन रखती हूं…..
अरसे बाद मिलेगा जब वो, उससे मिल कर मत रोना!
गम को अपने बाजू मे रख, उस पल मे बस खुश होना!
टूटे ख्वाब की सोच सोच तू, अपनी हिममत मत खोना!!
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Rachana is badhat ke liye aapka shukriya.
sir… these 2 lines can sum up the lives of so many people (myself included)
“jab kabhi bhi milenge, tab milke gale yun royenge,
jitne bhi hain khwaab purane, sab aksho se dhoyenge”
Saif Thanks.